What did we learn from our Anamatic feedback

Following the exhibition of our Anamatic we have received feedback from our target audience.

Narrative:
General story was easily understood
Clear sense of character was conveyed

Camera:
Intimate close ups are popular
Good variety of shots
Good use of pans
Editing/ camera angles could be too jumpy
Could use of POV shot from the bear
More close ups on pins
Make movement reflect state of mind

Sound:
Music needs to esculate
Good contrast of diegetic and non-diegetic
Good use of foley’s
Possibly could use childlike music e.g. Nursery rhyme
Layer more sounds

Mise-en-scene:
Props create a good atmosphere e.g. bear and tea party
Show more location
Spend more time on pins and scissors

Genre:
Atmosphere can be confusing – not consistent enough
Music adheres to horror genre
More hints at unsettling behaviour e.g. more shots of pins and voices

Titles:
Positioning is good
Need to think about font and colour